Hello Everyone:
I have been thinking very hard on how to achieved a balance look. Thanks to Shellyrae and others for pointing out the basic design of a LO. I did follow those adviced and kept the embelishments to 1.
Please feel free to critic that's the only way I can get better.
Here's a new one

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I think its beautiful!

You do have a typo, you want it to say "grow" not "grows." But I am an editor by trade, and while it may be noticeable to me, that doesn't mean you will care. Scrapbooks are a reflection of ourselves, typos and all!

I do think the paper tearing is a little too dep, it looks like it needs a little more detail. Try tearing a piece of real paper and keeping it near you when you start playing with your next paper tearing project - just as a reminder of what the real thing looks like. I still don't have a good paper tearing technique down solid - I think I do it differently everytime, just trying to find the best way for me.

Love how you used the elements - the metal sun and beads is beautiful and just the perfect touch for your layout! GREAT JOB!

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