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Old 08-04-2005
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Constructive Criticism needed

could you all look at this one and give me some feedback?

http://www.scrapbook-bytes.com/galle...500&ppuser=344
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Hi,

Looks lovely! The only thing I would suggest is perhaps a border a short distance from the edge - might work, might not.

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Hi Amanda!

I love the coloring of the photo and the font you chose. There are a couple things I could think of that you could try to see if it is the look you are going for. (*disclaimer: I like the look of elements on my page )

Maybe mat the picture with a white or darker pink
photo prongs to "hold the photo" or metal photo corners (I think that Shabby Princesses Little miss priss kit available in the download section here would go great)
Maybe some frilly lace or ribbon and maybe with a buckel of some sort (again the little miss priss kit has a really nice one)

Hope this helps you out!
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I feel like something is missing. I think it's the blank space above the text. My eyes are drawn to where those background swirls are. Maybe put something there and I agree with possibly matting the photo. I think it's adorable!
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Well, first it looks like a very pretty light pink on my monitor. I think that it needs something along the bottom, maybe a ribbon or somthing also, an element of some sort on the left (top or bottom) to help balance the announcement and create that oh so desired visual triange. Beautiful job!
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Old 08-05-2005
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I would maybe add a shadow or a bevel to the text to make it POP out! And maybe make it the same color as the dark color in the baby's hat.

Great job!
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