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This is so sweet! I can just picture the magic of the moment!! I really don't think you need to change a thing, but if you are looking for something ... what about making it rhyme?? I don't know if that makes it too cheesy, but here's my attempt:
Your eyes are sparkling,
As you clap your little hands,
Singing "It's a Small World"
And watching thousands of dolls dance.
You are thrilled,
Enthralled, in total bliss ...
I wish every one of your days
Would be just like this.
Last edited by petulantfem; 05-09-2008 at 07:04 PM.
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