Hi Maggie
Its a very sweet layout. I would suggest you stick to one style of elemenst for a more cohesive look. You ahve the handdrawn ribbons , "cartoon" abby in a shoe, heart eyelet and then heart gem charms which are all very different to one another.
Try using for example just the heart eyelets and "hang them from the ribbon bows and add a shadow for dimension.
Also try not to overlap fonts and elemenst unless the element is on top (eg you cant really write across teh top of teh heart eyelet as you have done with Cherish in this layout
I hope some of these suggestions help and as always take it with a grain of salt. Scrapbooking is about how it looks to you not any one else
